迴光返照

快被遺忘的老人

就像一個溺水者

             想抓住什麼
             來延年益壽

放響衝天炮

炸它個滿天星

      他偷笑

被火星燙到的人

(2006.3.8墨爾本)

The last radiance of

the setting sun

An old person who was soon forgotten

As a man to be drowned

He wanted to catch something
to prolong his life

And rushed a noisy firecracker aloft
exploding into a meteor shower

He smiled secretly at those

who were touched by heat of Mars

 (Vietnam, 2006.3.22)

■英詩由秋夢師兄指導